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I hold your word far greater than mine
But you don’t care about that
I’m not sure what I have done to make you not want me
But I’ll try to get you by my side

I don’t know what it was that made me think
That you were the only girl for my life
Maybe I just couldn’t deal with the thought
Of you with another group

But there you are
Always on his shoulder, in the center of their friends
You left us on the other side of the water
And it will never be parted again

Because now we only see you when he comes near us
And you have left us all together
I thought that I could really handle it
But it only makes me want you more

That we two are supposed to be together
And not you with him
So that the next time that I see you on his arm
I’ll know that you are just in denial

“Please take me back . . .”
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I didn't realize until I was rereading this that it does not have to be fanfiction. But it is. This is a poem from Ron's perspective, about Dramione. And how Ron thinks that she is in denial when it is really him.

PLEASE NOTE: If you are going to flame the Dramione shipper, do not say anything at all. I happen to know there are a lot of us Dramione shippers here on deviantart that would gladly flame you back. So don't think about that. We have you surrounded.

I :hug: the fellow Dramione shipper!

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:iconvelociraptor842:
I like it, but I'd like it more if it weren't Dramione. Still, I'll deal. >_<
Also, it's not really prose, is it? But then, I suppose there isn't a section for fanfiction that's poetry, is there?

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"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzche

"When we were good, you just closed your eyes. So when we are bad, we'll scar your mind." -MM

HUGS CURE EVERYTHING. :hug:
:iconcranberrymelon:
Well, when I first wrote this, it was full on prose. But I liked it better as poetry. And if there was a fanfic section in poetry, I'd have SO many more deviations!

You'll have to dael, my RonHermione fan friend! But whats happened? You haven't been talking to me lately. I still love you! :hug:

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You’re not my type. Come back after a sex change :strip:
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:iconnmmi-nut:
I take it this is before we kill off everyone?


Loved it, showed stupid Ron being bested! ...yeah. Still don't like Ron.

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I thought this was my sincere smile! Isn't this my sincere smile?

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:iconcranberrymelon:
Do you think that I do? He's in denial, hence the title.
And yes. We still haven't set up the date.

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You’re not my type. Come back after a sex change :strip:
:roll::strong::flirty::threaten::wow: :painter::tunes: ::pride:
:iconnmmi-nut:
Hmm...we really should have someway of denoting the importance of it...maybe post the scenes as we imagine them...a challenge-eque thing of killing off characters in short prose...:dance:

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:iconcranberrymelon:
That would be SO cool =D

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You’re not my type. Come back after a sex change :strip:
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:iconnmmi-nut:
:nod: :excited:

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I thought this was my sincere smile! Isn't this my sincere smile?

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this is really good. me likey :D

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“Cause time isn't healing, Pretty sick of staring at my ceiling, And I, I can't help the way I've fallen for you. I have a run to try and send me to sleep, I think that's all I need. The only time I seem to spend with you, Is all in my dreams.” T. Felton
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Thank you. Isn't Dramione great? :love:

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You’re not my type. Come back after a sex change :strip:
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